Я от всего сердца надеюсь, что сценарий STID тоже появится рано или поздно в сети. Я душу продам за то, чтобы почитать комментарии Орси и Куртцмана ко всем киркоспочным моментам. И не только.
Вот, например, сцена слушания дела Кирка в сценарии XI фильма — намного дольше. (то, что не вошло в фильм, выделено жирным шрифтом. Обратите внимание на комментарии авторов!
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«...As a Vulcan, I require no additional training to control my narcissism when making command decisions.»
No he DIN'T! Kirk's hit guys for a lot less -- The crowd all but "OOOOOOHs." But Kirk ain't fucking done yet... KIRK
(uncomfortable beat)
Yessir. I believe I have the right to
face my accuser directly.
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83 CONTINUED: 83
President nods toward the assembly. SPOCK RISES. He and Kirk
MEET EYES for the first time. It's clock-stopping.
ACADEMY PRESIDENT
Step forward please. This is Commander
Spock, one of our most distinguished
graduates. He's programmed the Kobayashi
Maru test for the last four years.
Spock steps up to the OTHER PODIUM. President nods.
SPOCK
Cadet Kirk. It is obvious you somehow
managed to install and activate a sub-
routine in the programming code, thereby
changing the conditions of the test.
We happen to find GAILA, in the crowd, fucking pissed. (в удаленных сценах показано, что Кирк взломал систему, обманув Гейлу).
KIRK
Your point being?
ACADEMY PRESIDENT
In academic vernacular, you cheated.
KIRK
Respectfully. Define "cheating".
SPOCK
To deceive by trickery.
KIRK
Now let me ask you something I think we
all know the answer to: the test is
rigged, isn't it? You programmed it to
be unwinnable.
ACADEMY PRESIDENT
Mr. Kirk, I don't see how the intent of
the exam is relevant to these
proceedings.
KIRK
Because if I'm right, Sir, then the test
itself is a cheat.
SPOCK
Your argument precludes the possibility
of a no-win scenario --
KIRK
I don't believe in no-win scenarios --
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83 CONTINUED: (2) 83
FIND PIKE amongst the officers in attendance. His eyes locked
on Kirk. This is his boy. His recruit. And he's INVESTED.
SPOCK
Then not only have you violated the
rules, you've failed to understand the
principle lesson.
KIRK
Please, enlighten me.
SPOCK
You, of all people should know, Cadet
Kirk -- A captain cannot cheat death.
ON KIRK. The first punch by Spock that landed. The cockiness
slips away as he senses where this is going --
KIRK
"I of all people?"
SPOCK
Your father, Lieutenant George Kirk, had
assumed command of his vessel before
killed in action, did he not?
Shit. The DADDY card. Kirk, a mix of ANGER and EMBARRASSMENT --
KIRK
How long did it take you to look that up?
SPOCK
How long did it take you to program the
virus that allowed you to cheat?
The President smirks; considers ending this now but doesn't,
it's just too damn entertaining...
KIRK
Maybe you just don't like that I beat
your test.
SPOCK
I am Vulcan. "Like" is not a verb in our
vernacular. I've simply made the logical
deduction that you're a liar.
KIRK
What an idiot I am for taking that
personally --
SPOCK
Agreed. Furthermore, you have failed to
divine the purpose of the test.
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83 CONTINUED: (3) 83
KIRK
Enlighten me again.
SPOCK
The purpose is to experience fear. Fear
in the face of certain death. To accept
that fear and maintain command of one's
self and one's crew. This is a quality
expected in every Starfleet captain.
Kirk absorbs that. Then --
KIRK
So you're telling me the point. Of the
whole thing. Is to be afraid?
SPOCK
Fear is necessary, yes.
KIRK
Have you taken the test, Commander Spork?
SPOCK
Spock. As a Vulcan, I require no
additional training to control my
narcissism when making command decisions.
No he DIN'T! Kirk's hit guys for a lot less -- The crowd all
but "OOOOOOHs." But Kirk ain't fucking done yet.
KIRK
You keep reminding me that you're Vulcan.
And I'm sure you're really proud of that,
who wouldn't be-- but isn't it true you
people don't experience fear at all?
ON SPOCK. He raises that eyebrow. And Kirk sees... no matter
how subtly... that he has fucking made CONTACT. Smelling blood -
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KIRK (CONT'D)
And if that's the case -- What's that say
about your ability to make command
decisions?
Well. Looks like Kirk just hit him in HIS fucking weak spot.
And before this lovefest can continue --Или вот, конечно, разрывающая сердце сцена с Шатнером/Кирком.
«...You once said being a starship captain was my first, best destiny... if that's true, then yours is to be by my side. If there's any true logic to the universe... we'll end up on that bridge again someday....» KIRK/ SHATNER
Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to
you...
(stops, grins)
I know I know, it's illogical to
celebrate something you had nothing to do
with, but I haven't had the chance to
congratulate you on your appointment to
the ambassadorship so I thought I'd seize
the occasion... Bravo, Spock -- they tell
me your first mission may take you away
for awhile, so I'll be the first to wish
you luck... and to say...
(beat, emotional)
I miss you, old friend.
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CONTINUED: (3)
... and we're PUSHING IN on Young Spock, taking in the image of
Kirk's future self, the message, but above all -- the clear,
unquestionable friendship these two men had...
INT. CORRIDOR - CONTINUOUS
As Spock Prime walks off down the corridor, he passes right by a
man conferring with a nurse -- the man pauses, turns... it's
SAREK. Suddenly overcome by a feeling that the stranger who's
just passed him is... oddly familiar.
KIRK/SHATNER (V.O.)
I suppose I'd always imagined us...
outgrowing Starfleet together. Watching
life swing us into our Emeritus years...
INT. STARBASE ONE - HANGAR - ETERNAL NIGHT
MUSIC BUILDING -- glass walls reveal THE ENTERPRISE at dock,
UTILITY CRAFTS floating around it, repairing. Standing at
attention in rows, THE ENTERPRISE CREW -- over four hundred of
them wearing DRESS UNIFORMS -- TRACK DOWN the faces, all proud:
KIRK/SHATNER (V.O.)
I look around at the new cadets now and
can't help thinking... has it really been
so long? Wasn't it only yesterday we
stepped onto the Enterprise as boys?
That I had to prove to the crew I
deserved command... and their respect?
And we STOP ON YOUNG KIRK. Composed, focused, proud. A man.
And to every fan's delight, finally wearing his YELLOW SHIRT.
<...>
KIRK/SHATNER (V.O.)
I know what you'd say -- `It's their turn
now, Jim...' And of course you're
right... but it got me thinking:
INT. STARFLEET HOSPITAL - EARTH - DAY
Our montage comes full circle as we END on Kirk's transmission:
KIRK/SHATNER
Who's to say we can't go one more round?
By the last tally, only twenty five
percent of the galaxy's been chartered...
I'd call that negligent. Criminal even --
an invitation.
(MORE)
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CONTINUED:
KIRK/SHATNER (CONT'D)
You once said being a starship captain
was my first, best destiny... if that's
true, then yours is to be by my side. If
there's any true logic to the universe...
we'll end up on that bridge again
someday.
Stops, grins. Because this is the part he needs to say most...
KIRK
Admit it, Spock. For people like us, the
journey itself... is home.
Young Spock's face. Lost in feelings that flood through him.Или вот этот маленький момент, которого не было в фильме, т.к. не было всей этой темы про Спока и страх. Аманда перед падением оборачивается к Споку, и...
their eyes lock -- THE COLLAPSING GROUND RACING TOWARD THEM -- and in a surreal, intimate moment, Amanda says to Spock, quietly:
AMANDA
It's okay. To be scared.
Собственно, сценарий:
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21.06.2013 в 22:28а....а..откуда эта сцена?и как она должна была выглядеть?я конечно счас влезу в сценарий(кстати, спасибо за ссылку), но русская речь глазу приятнее и понятнее.
счас, прорыдаюсь только.ох.
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21.06.2013 в 22:33И я хочу напомнить, что эту запись Спок!Нимой взял с собой, когда отправлялся в самоубийственную миссию спасать ромуланскую империю. Это все, что он взял с собой, много лет спустя после того, как его Джим Кирк умер.
Я ПОЙДУ ПОЛЕЖУ НА ПОЛУ
А речь, собственно, о том, что как же так получилось, друг мой Спок, что я теперь на Земле весь такой адмирал, а у тебя какая-то многолетняя миссия, и на космические корабли поднимаются новые, молодые, а помнишь, когда такими же были мы, а помнишь, как я стал тем, кто я стал, и знаешь, наша судьба - это быть рядом, и мы будем, если эта вселенная имеет хоть какой-то смысл.
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21.06.2013 в 23:08ужасные люди, как можно было это вырезать.
ужасные люди, как можно так больно делать словами.
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21.06.2013 в 23:51Кстати, я читала РПС-фик, в котором после первого прочтения сценария и конкретно после этой сцены с Шатнером Нимой встал и поблагодарил Абрамса за то, что он не побоялся показать отношения Кирка и Спока во всей их гомосексуальной красе
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23.06.2013 в 14:30ewinfic.livejournal.com/136749.html - где-то в начале. Сам фик я, кажется, не дочитала)))
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23.06.2013 в 15:00